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blow your mind

let me
blow your mind
turn it
inside out
let’s run
like wild horses
along the shore
of destiny
tempting fate
toying with ideas
of a future
unimagined
my visions
high definition
chase me
you know i won’t run
too fast
cos really
i want you to catch me
so you can free me
but first let me
blow your mind
promise to have
your thoughts
fears
desires
pouring out
of your mind
once i blow it
suck it
fuck it
chase me fast
grab me hard
kiss me slow
make me feel
every
single
ounce
of that pent up
sexual
tension
burning your core
i just wanna
blow your mind
the way you blow mine
come over
i’ve been squirming in bed
for hours
trembling
like an addict
hours from a high
you are truly a drug
worthy of addiction
i am afflicted
telling of things i’d do
just to get a taste of you
i need you
to feed me
fill me
fuck me
but first
let me blow your mind…

Posted on July 15, 2009 at 11:34 pm in Poetry, THOUGHTS, Uncategorized   |  RSS feed

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8 Comments to “blow your mind”

    
  1. bornininiquity
    July 16, 2009 at 10:29 am

    Snaps, Spins, twirls and cartwheels! MIND BLOWING! I LOVE it!!

  2. TomboyTigress
    July 16, 2009 at 6:25 pm

    I’m lovin’ this-“Let’s run like wild horses along the shore of destiny”, that’s a beautiful visualization. 🙂 The Tigress gives this magnificent piece two thumbs up!

  3. Red
    July 16, 2009 at 7:59 pm

    V you always touch me with your words, spinning a tapestry that stimulates every sense..beautiful, just wow 🙂

  4. knowledge
    July 16, 2009 at 8:37 pm

    Floating in the aftermath of such a beautifully written longing. You have saturated senses with your sensual playright. What passion this depicts.

  5. vyzion360
    July 22, 2009 at 2:04 am

    Hey you! Just stopping in to see what’s new. I love this piece … you are such an amazing and intense writer! Have I asked you if you’re pushing for publication yet?

    • Vanessa
      July 22, 2009 at 10:36 am

      ashamed to say that I am not! =/ thank you for the feedback! coming from such a great writer, it is a huge compliment! =)

  6. Mellogyrl
    August 2, 2009 at 11:23 am

    Love the passion and intensity of this exceptional piece!!!
    One could feel the agony of the longing…love the play with words!!!

  7. spicielady
    January 4, 2010 at 12:49 am

    love, love, love this piece blew my mind, beautiful work

    
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