I havent feel this low
in forever
and i’ve been low
if life is a maze
i am so lost
and if life is a game
it feels like i’m losing
im sinking
damn, this is a new low
i tried to grasp
the other lows
on the way down
but i’m just plummeting
too fast
i’m so low.

12 Responses to “low.”

  1. Sometimes it takes us being at our absolute lowest as an awakening point so that we can achieve our highest potential. Keep your up luv! Just because you feel low, doesn’t mean you have to be low. You’ll find your way back up. See ya soon. 🙂

  2. A very nice poetry ..
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  3. Keep pressing up… falling low means there is somthing up there, something higher which you can attempt to achieve 🙂

    Liked it.

    Happy Rally

  4. Dear Vanessa,
    Sometimes, we stop looking at life and look at things that life brings on to us… and it seems so low… Life is beautiful only if we have the eyes to see it… and the beauty of life not lies in things around us but in the change that it keeps constantly bring in, all the time to us… Enjoy, don’t be so low, its bound to change.

    I liked this verse.. thanks for sharing.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  5. hope you well,

    vivid capture of your emotions,
    beautiful poem.

  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/
    Welcome to Poets Rally, if you wish to be part of it, I will be more than happy to link your entry, the requirement is to visit and comment for 18 poets…poetry awards are to be assigned upon the completion.
    you will have poets return favors for sure.
    let me know when you are ready!
    keep writing.

  7. i hope its not your life you talk of here.. though we all do have such times .. clear write ! like that 🙂

  8. welcome to attend poets rally week 33,

    only if you place your entry in, then you are a formal participant, traffic comes in more steadily…
    poetry awards are given to participants only. thus you bet get yourself well known to the community by participation.
    Happy Friday!
    Hurry up.

  9. Keep hope, everything that’s come low has to reach heights someday! 🙂

  10. Love this!


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